On Tue, 2014-11-25 at 14:35 -0500, Simo Sorce wrote:
On Tue, 25 Nov 2014 14:30:47 -0500
Stephen Gallagher <sgallagh(a)redhat.com> wrote:
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> On Tue, 2014-11-25 at 12:07 -0500, Simo Sorce wrote:
> > At Today's meeting we discussed a perception issue with the WG and
> > we decided we should write something about ti to try to correct the
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> > Here is a first attempt at addressing the core arguments.
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> Looks pretty good. I've tweaked some of the wording and have a second
> draft attached now. The only thing I'm not certain about is the first
> two lines. Simo, were those meant to be the blog title and first line?
Yes, I should have made that clearer.
> Maybe instead title it:
> "Fedora Server Working <strikeout>for</strikeout> With You"
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> Thoughts?
I liked my proposal, and I am not sure yours "captures the eye", but I
am not communication experts so I am open to any change.
I'm no communication expert either, but "Who matters?" sounds kind of
like "Who cares?" to me. I worry that it sends the wrong sort of
capture-the-eye message. I'm certainly open to something better than my
counter-proposal, though. It was kind of off-the-cuff.