[Bug 970468] New: Inconsistent expression in Development section of Fedora 19 release notes
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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=970468
Bug ID: 970468
Summary: Inconsistent expression in Development section of
Fedora 19 release notes
Product: Fedora Documentation
Version: devel
Component: release-notes
Severity: unspecified
Priority: unspecified
Assignee: relnotes(a)fedoraproject.org
Reporter: tiansworld(a)fedoraproject.org
QA Contact: docs-qa(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
CC: oglesbyzm(a)gmail.com, relnotes(a)fedoraproject.org,
wb8rcr(a)arrl.net
Description of problem:
Under Development section,
There is a paragraph:
Python programmers who use the xml ...
<package>PyXML</package> replaced the <function>stdlib</function> code with its
own ... code and unmaintained upstream.
I think what the sentence "<package>PyXML</package> replaced the
<function>stdlib</function> code with its own" expressing is wrong and
inconsistent with previous statement.
<package>PyXML</package> is replaced, not <function>stdlib</function>.
Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
Fedora 19 beta
How reproducible:
Steps to Reproduce:
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Actual results:
Expected results:
It should be changed.
For example, change it to:
<function>stdlib</function> replaced the <package>PyXML</package> code with its
own.
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[Bug 977771] New: System_Daemons: Should "/var/run/journal is volatile" be in the past tense?
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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=977771
Bug ID: 977771
Summary: System_Daemons: Should "/var/run/journal is volatile"
be in the past tense?
Product: Fedora Documentation
Version: devel
Component: release-notes
Severity: unspecified
Priority: unspecified
Assignee: relnotes(a)fedoraproject.org
Reporter: jmatsuzawa(a)gnome.org
QA Contact: docs-qa(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
CC: oglesbyzm(a)gmail.com, relnotes(a)fedoraproject.org,
wb8rcr(a)arrl.net
Description of problem:
In the following sentence:
"In previous releases, journal data was stored in
<filename>/var/run/journal</filename>, which is volatile and cleared on
reboot."
Should "which is volatile..." be written in the past tense? Does it mean "which
was volatile..."?
I'm sorry if I misunderstand the sentence.
Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
F19
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[Bug 973173] New: Typo in Desktop.xml for F19
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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=973173
Bug ID: 973173
Summary: Typo in Desktop.xml for F19
Product: Fedora Documentation
Version: devel
Component: release-notes
Severity: unspecified
Priority: unspecified
Assignee: relnotes(a)fedoraproject.org
Reporter: jmatsuzawa(a)gnome.org
QA Contact: docs-qa(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
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Created attachment 759599
--> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=759599&action=edit
Fix typo
Description of problem:
Desktop.xml for F19 has a typo. Look at the following diff (the patch is
attached):
diff --git a/en-US/Desktop.xml b/en-US/Desktop.xml
index 9bd23e1..99bf5d7 100644
--- a/en-US/Desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Desktop.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
The latest release of the popular desktop environment
<productname>Cinnamon</productname> brings new features and polish to Fedora
&PRODVER;, including:
<simplelist>
<member>
- <emphasis>nemo</emphasis>, the file manager, has been heavily
modified to itegrate it's behavior with Cinnamon.
+ <emphasis>nemo</emphasis>, the file manager, has been heavily
modified to itegrate its behavior with Cinnamon.
</member>
<member>
<emphasis>screensaver</emphasis> has been improved, including a lock
screen with customizable away message.
Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
Fedora 19
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