On Sun, 15 Feb 2009 10:53:13 -0800, "Adam Williamson" awilliam@redhat.com said:
Hi, guys. I've just completed the QA section for FWN. As it's my first shot, can people please check it over and make sure I didn't screw up? :) Thanks!
It flows very nicely and is very readable. I think Dale's comments are useful and would add that it's probably best to specify dates and times as per the style guide[1]. Apart from the large number of local variations in how dates are written out the content is archived so it's easier for people reading it to see 2009-02-19 than "this Thursday, February 19th".
[1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/StyleGuide/DatesAndTimes
Thanks again for taking on this beat Adam!
Best,