I'll change these as I edit this issue -- thanks all!
- pascal
Adam Williamson wrote:
On Sun, 2009-02-15 at 18:55 -0500, Oisin Feeley wrote:
It flows very nicely and is very readable. I think Dale's comments are useful and would add that it's probably best to specify dates and times as per the style guide[1]. Apart from the large number of local variations in how dates are written out the content is archived so it's easier for people reading it to see 2009-02-19 than "this Thursday, February 19th".
[1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/StyleGuide/DatesAndTimes
Thanks again for taking on this beat Adam!
Oops - missed that bit. I'll fix it if you didn't already. Thanks.