Thanks Ryan :) Yes, absolutely, more posts are on there way for sure!
Looks like I also earned a badge, yay! :)
Thanks.
Regards,
Sumit Bhardwaj
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1. Re: Pending Post Review: Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes :
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Date: Mon, 15 Jun 2015 09:43:12 -0400
From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com>
To: marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
Subject: Re: Pending Post Review: Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes :
Here's some help
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On Mon, Jun 15, 2015 at 05:12:19PM +1000, Ryan Lerch wrote:
> On 06/15/2015 04:19 PM, Sumit Bhardwaj wrote:
>> Hi Ryan,
>>
>> Looks good to me :)
>> Regards,
>> Sumit Bhardwaj
>> On Monday 15 June 2015 11:37 AM, Ryan Lerch wrote:
>>> On 06/15/2015 03:00 PM, Sumit Bhardwaj wrote:
>>>> Hi Ryan,
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for the great suggestions. The pleasure is all mine, Fedora has
>>>> brought so many positive changes in my world of computing, If I can do
>>>> anything for the project, it's an honor and a privilege.
>>>>
>>>> I have tried to incorporate your suggestions in the article and
>>>> resubmitted it for review. Please have a look and let me know if any
>>>> further refinement would be good.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks again.
>>>> Regards,
>>>> Sumit Bhardwaj
>>>> On Monday 15 June 2015 09:14 AM, Ryan Lerch wrote:
>>>>> Hi Sumit!
>>>>>
>>>>> First up, thanks for submitting your first post to the Fedora
>>>>> Magazine. I have done a quick review of your post, and here are a
>>>>> few ideas / suggestions from me. (other editors, feel free to pitch
>>>>> in ideas too)
>>>>>
>>>>> First up, i'd probably be a bit more direct and informative with
the
>>>>> title, instead of "Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes : Here's
some
>>>>> help"
>>>>> maybe something like "Solution for graphics issues on some
Intel
>>>>> graphics chipsets in Fedora 22" (just a suggestion, feel free
to
>>>>> change and or edit too :) )
>>>>>
>>>>> Secondly, i'd probably remove the majority of the first
paragraph
>>>>> and lead with the issue itself (your third paragraph) -- most people
>>>>> get to the magazine via third party links, so starting with the info
>>>>> they came for always works well. I'm thinking something like:
>>>>> """
>>>>> Fedora 22 was [link to release annonce on fedora mag]released
>>>>> recently[/link], and if you are using a Pre-Sandybridge era
>>>>> Intel-based graphics chipset (For example, Intel 4 series
>>>>> motherboards with G41 chipset and GMA X4500 graphics), chances are
>>>>> that you might be facing graphics issues like shown in below
>>>>> screenshot on Fedora 22.
>>>>> [screenshot]
>>>>> """
>>>>>
>>>>> Then after the screenshot, have your brief description of the
>>>>> problem, covering the points that fedora switched to a new accel
>>>>> method that doesnt work so well with older chipsets.
>>>>>
>>>>> Then put the solution. I found the bug for this issue
>>>>> (
https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1226743) which might be
>>>>> worth mentioning. And there updated kernels (kernel-4.0.5-300.fc22
>>>>> and kernel-4.0.5-200.fc21) that fix this issue is already in
>>>>> updates-testing, so it is probably a better solution to recommend
>>>>> that people install the new package with the fix from updates
>>>>> testing, or wait for the package to hit the proper repos (rather
>>>>> than editing a config file that they may forget about and cause them
>>>>> issues in the future.)
>>>>>
>>>>> cheers,
>>>>> ryanlerch
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>> Just did a quick edit, and added a quick howto on getting the packages
>> >from updates-testing (in case the reader doesnt know how to), and added
>>> some emphasis on the note that the workaround is a temp solution.
>>>
>>> Does that look ok to you? feel free to revert if you don't agree :)
>>>
>>> cheers,
>>> ryanlerch
> Looks good!
>
> Can one of the other editors have a quick sanity check of the post this
> morning (Monday morning USA time), and publish if it is ok sometime this
> morning?
I made a few more tweaks and will publish it.