How about; "Fedora is similar to proprietary operating systems like Microsoft Windows and provides an easy and powerful graphical environment, office suite, games and more. It is a secure and virus-free experience with brand new releases full of major improvements every six months all for free (both in terms of cost, and ability to change the underlying code to suit your own needs)."
Isn't it similar to *BSD too ?
"Fedora is an Operating System, just like Microsoft Windows, Apple Mac OS X or <insert as many as you want, keeping in mind that too few can hurt people and too much will bore the reader> ... "
There's one thing that is concerning me.
When I submitted a game package in fedora, I had a description similar to "this game is in the style of <name of a commercial game>" and I was told to remove the reference to a commercial trademark not owned by the Fedora Project as it could cause legal issues.
Aren't we in a similar case by writing this kind of stuff on our wiki page ?
Regards,
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Mathieu Bridon (bochecha)