Hi team,
I'm making some editions to Sylvia's Python article. Particulary, I'm not happy with the results, I think we can discuss this to make it a serie, and not a single article. Being the original Sylvia's article the first one, and the pass to an article about tips, Virtual Environment, PEPs and others.
Here is the preview:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14577&preview=true&preview_id=14577
Best Regards,
On 10/27/2016 10:05 AM, Eduard Lucena wrote:
Hi team,
I'm making some editions to Sylvia's Python article. Particulary, I'm not happy with the results, I think we can discuss this to make it a serie, and not a single article. Being the original Sylvia's article the first one, and the pass to an article about tips, Virtual Environment, PEPs and others.
Here is the preview:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14577&preview=true&preview_id=14577
Best Regards,
Hey Eduard, thanks for volunteering to review and edit this article. In the meeting today, we took a review of it and brainstormed some feedback on ways we could get this article polished up for a review. Since the article focuses on more abstract concepts, the current organization seemed a little confusing. Our thoughts on how to improve this article might be to start from a fresh slate and cherry-pick pieces from the original one and adding in new content as well.
The proposed structure for this article we thought of during the meeting was like this:
* Introducing Python in Fedora => * Finding a development environment (installing Python, libraries, and IDEs from repos, etc.) => * Popular tools and Python tricks (pip in virtualenv, etc.) => * Where to get help / learn more about Python in Fedora
This should help make the article more clear and incorporate some of the specific technical tips we discussed in the past. Additionally, it might be a good idea as an end goal to help a user write a simple "Hello world!" Python program in the article.
Hope this feedback is helpful! Thanks for helping out here. I have actioned this on to you for doing, but if you do not think you will have the time to work on, please let us know.
Hi Justin,
I will be happy to cotinue working on this. I will look at the log to check the ideas discussed on the meeting and put the work on tonight.
Br,
2016-10-27 19:17 GMT-03:00 Justin W. Flory jflory7@gmail.com:
On 10/27/2016 10:05 AM, Eduard Lucena wrote:
Hi team,
I'm making some editions to Sylvia's Python article. Particulary, I'm not happy with the results, I think we can discuss this to make it a serie, and not a single article. Being the original Sylvia's article the first one, and the pass to an article about tips, Virtual Environment, PEPs and others.
Here is the preview:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14577&preview=true&preview_id=14577
Best Regards,
Hey Eduard, thanks for volunteering to review and edit this article. In the meeting today, we took a review of it and brainstormed some feedback on ways we could get this article polished up for a review. Since the article focuses on more abstract concepts, the current organization seemed a little confusing. Our thoughts on how to improve this article might be to start from a fresh slate and cherry-pick pieces from the original one and adding in new content as well.
The proposed structure for this article we thought of during the meeting was like this:
- Introducing Python in Fedora =>
- Finding a development environment (installing Python, libraries, and
IDEs from repos, etc.) =>
- Popular tools and Python tricks (pip in virtualenv, etc.) =>
- Where to get help / learn more about Python in Fedora
This should help make the article more clear and incorporate some of the specific technical tips we discussed in the past. Additionally, it might be a good idea as an end goal to help a user write a simple "Hello world!" Python program in the article.
Hope this feedback is helpful! Thanks for helping out here. I have actioned this on to you for doing, but if you do not think you will have the time to work on, please let us know.
-- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@gmail.com
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Hello!
Thanks for keeping this up. I've been too busy lately to write anything myself but I'm following the emails and trying to contribute with ideas.
I still think this should be a very basic article with the first points for someone to get started. And after writing other articles about how to write a simple "Hello world" in Python, different environments, and so.
My thoughts.
Cheers,
Sylvia
On 28/10/16 14:36, Eduard Lucena wrote:
Hi Justin,
I will be happy to cotinue working on this. I will look at the log to check the ideas discussed on the meeting and put the work on tonight.
Br,
2016-10-27 19:17 GMT-03:00 Justin W. Flory jflory7@gmail.com:
On 10/27/2016 10:05 AM, Eduard Lucena wrote:
Hi team,
I'm making some editions to Sylvia's Python article. Particulary, I'm not happy with the results, I think we can discuss this to make it a serie, and not a single article. Being the original Sylvia's article the first one, and the pass to an article about tips, Virtual Environment, PEPs and others.
Here is the preview:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14577&preview=true&preview_id=14577
Best Regards,
Hey Eduard, thanks for volunteering to review and edit this article. In the meeting today, we took a review of it and brainstormed some feedback on ways we could get this article polished up for a review. Since the article focuses on more abstract concepts, the current organization seemed a little confusing. Our thoughts on how to improve this article might be to start from a fresh slate and cherry-pick pieces from the original one and adding in new content as well.
The proposed structure for this article we thought of during the meeting was like this:
- Introducing Python in Fedora =>
- Finding a development environment (installing Python, libraries, and
IDEs from repos, etc.) =>
- Popular tools and Python tricks (pip in virtualenv, etc.) =>
- Where to get help / learn more about Python in Fedora
This should help make the article more clear and incorporate some of the specific technical tips we discussed in the past. Additionally, it might be a good idea as an end goal to help a user write a simple "Hello world!" Python program in the article.
Hope this feedback is helpful! Thanks for helping out here. I have actioned this on to you for doing, but if you do not think you will have the time to work on, please let us know.
-- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@gmail.com
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Hello,
I read this again and I think each one of the points mentioned by Justin can make an article on its own. To me this one with a featured image is ready to go and then we can add other articles focused on other points related to Python & Fedora. I particularly like the "popular tools and tricks" and the "where to learn more about Python and Fedora"
Cheers,
Sylvia
On 28/10/16 00:17, Justin W. Flory wrote:
On 10/27/2016 10:05 AM, Eduard Lucena wrote:
Hi team,
I'm making some editions to Sylvia's Python article. Particulary, I'm not happy with the results, I think we can discuss this to make it a serie, and not a single article. Being the original Sylvia's article the first one, and the pass to an article about tips, Virtual Environment, PEPs and others.
Here is the preview:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14577&preview=true&preview_id=14577
Best Regards,
Hey Eduard, thanks for volunteering to review and edit this article. In the meeting today, we took a review of it and brainstormed some feedback on ways we could get this article polished up for a review. Since the article focuses on more abstract concepts, the current organization seemed a little confusing. Our thoughts on how to improve this article might be to start from a fresh slate and cherry-pick pieces from the original one and adding in new content as well.
The proposed structure for this article we thought of during the meeting was like this:
- Introducing Python in Fedora =>
- Finding a development environment (installing Python, libraries, and
IDEs from repos, etc.) =>
- Popular tools and Python tricks (pip in virtualenv, etc.) =>
- Where to get help / learn more about Python in Fedora
This should help make the article more clear and incorporate some of the specific technical tips we discussed in the past. Additionally, it might be a good idea as an end goal to help a user write a simple "Hello world!" Python program in the article.
Hope this feedback is helpful! Thanks for helping out here. I have actioned this on to you for doing, but if you do not think you will have the time to work on, please let us know.
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