Hi!

You're missing a dot after "in 2015" and a comma after "and others". You also wrote "finall", was it maybe "finally"? This sentence "The physical pursuits couple with his rabbit food meal plan help keep him in shape.". I understand it but it could be better I think. Those are the ones I caught at the moment. Maybe there are others I overlooked.

Regards, Silvia FAS: Lailah

2018-01-06 1:35 GMT+01:00 charles profitt fedora@cprofitt.com:

Hello all:

The next How Do You Fedora article is ready for review.

https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19863&preview=1&_ppp=55c04036f6

Sorry for the delay on this one. I have one more person I am contacting, but due to robotics it might take a while to put together and get ready.

Charles

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