Hello Link,
I checked the first article for readability (I'm sorry but I don't have
time to do any more today). I made a few suggestions in the Google Doc
below. Please understand these are only suggestions.
Oh, and this is a more general thing, are we cool with using Google
Docs? TBH it's my go to when I'm editing stuff as Libre is
significantly inferior and I couldn't find anything else on Gnome
Software.
Here is the link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UK7V3cgPsl3wvJlZb3ObrKIs8Mwzqspl-QY
aW5G9ovg/edit?usp=sharing
Regards,
Stuart Brady
On Thu, 2017-07-06 at 23:07 -0700, Link Dupont wrote:
New preview links (I hope).
Part 1:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=17880&preview=1&_ppp=8de1fb8558
Part 2:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=17929&preview=1&_ppp=3115e531ea
On Thu, 2017-07-06 at 23:03 -0700, Link Dupont wrote:
> On Thu, 2017-07-06 at 16:13 -0700, Link Dupont wrote:
> > On Thu, 2017-07-06 at 21:39 +0000, Justin W. Flory wrote:
> > > On 07/03/2017 11:09 PM, Link Dupont wrote:
> > > > Perfect feedback. I'll give that a pass. Do you think
there's
> > > > too
> > > > much
> > > > time spent on setting up AWS? I was thinking about a slight
> > > > restructuring of the article to focus more on duplicity, and
> > > > leave
> > > > most
> > > > of the AWS stuff up to the user. Basically writing the
> > > > article
> > > > assuming
> > > > that the user has their AWS_ACCESS_KEY_ID and
> > > > AWS_SECRET_ACCESS_KEY
> > > > already and just telling them to plug them in.
> > > >
> > >
> > > Hey Link,
> > >
> > > This came up during the meeting today. We remembered that you
> > > wanted
> > > to
> > > wait until all three articles in the series were complete
> > > before
> > > you
> > > published them. However, in the release upgrade article…
> > >
> > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=17971&preview=1&_ppp=0dcd79e6
> > > 7b
> > >
> > > …we briefly mention about taking backups, and point to a PkgDB
> > > link
> > > for
> > > deja-dup. What do you think about publishing the first one on
> > > Monday,
> > > and then cross-linking this in the upgrade instruction article?
> > > This
> > > might help give the series a long shelf-life since the upgrade
> > > article
> > > gets a lot of traffic for a couple months after an upgrade (so
> > > ideally,
> > > people might discover the whole backup series by looking up
> > > instructions
> > > on how to upgrade).
> > >
> > > However, we wanted to check with you if you want to do this
> > > first.
> > > We
> > > could always go back later and edit the link to your series
> > > once
> > > all
> > > the
> > > drafts are up. What do you think?
> > >
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> > Echoing what I said in #fedora-magazine. It looks like part 3
> > (deja-
> > dup) *won't* build (technically) on top of part 1 (duplicity)
> > like
> > I
> > originally thought. Part 2 (duply) can definitely build on top of
> > part
> > 1 though. So I'd like to have part 1 and 2 finalized before
> > publishing
> > so that the full backup created in part 1 is detected by duply in
> > part
> > 2.
> >
> > Both articles do exist in draft form. I'm currently editing the
> > commands in part 2 to make sure the output is correct, and the
> > duply
> > profile detects the full backup created with duplicity. Both
> > articles
> > are mostly complete. Once I've given them another pass over to
> > make
> > sure the commands are correct, they'll still need an editorial
> > review.
> > If someone can possibly edit them over the weekend, then we could
> > probably publish part 1 on Monday.
> >
> > They both articles also will need feature images. I had hoped to
> > try
> > one on my own, but maybe Ryan should crank out one for Part 1 so
> > it's
> > ready for publishing on Monday.
> >
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> I finished up Part 1 and Part 2. I'd greatly appreciate an
> editorial
> eye; I made a number of changes late tonight, and I know my error
> count
> goes up significantly the later in the evening I write.
>
> Also I'd like it if someone could follow the steps to make sure I
> didn't make any assumptions about software on my system.
>
> ~link
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