Nick,
I took a pass at combining two of your Silverblue articles into a single
article as we discussed earlier today:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=31001&preview=1&_ppp=0550e7e4ed
This was a pretty deep surgery at times, so I won't list all of the edits I
made. Here's the high-level view:
* I tried to organize it into a logical flow, the headers should make this
clear
* Most of the content comes directly from your two articles (sometimes
re-ordered from where you originally had them), but I did insert a few
sentences here and there to fix the flow
* I added a little more to the end to give it a soft landing
I'm happy to discuss any questions on-list or in #fedora-magazine (I'm
generally around from 1300-2100 UTC, give or take). If you don't have any
objections, I'll get this scheduled for Friday morning. If you do have
objections, we'll converge on an agreeable solution.
Thanks,
BC
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