From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com>
To: "Sumantro Mukherjee" <sumukher(a)redhat.com>
Cc: "Fedora Magazine mailing list" <magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org>
Sent: Friday, April 28, 2017 3:12:08 AM
Subject: [magazine] Re: [Request to Review] Automating lights with PIR motion sensor ,
Arduino with Fedora
On Mon, Apr 24, 2017 at 08:07:33AM -0400, Sumantro Mukherjee wrote:
> Hey All,
>
> I have drafted a small article on how to automate lights with PIR sensor
> and Arduino with Fedora
>
>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=17213&action=edit
>
> Can someone review?
Sumantro, please review the workflow:
https://fedoramagazine.org/writing-an-article-for-the-fedora-magazine/
We discussed this article in the Magazine editorial meeting tonight
and love the idea. However, we feel it could benefit from more work.
(1) screenshot should be from the OS and not a camera
(2) process is a bit scarce, could maybe use more explanation and
detail
Are you still inclined to work on this article?
yes, I have worked a bit more and added some more clarity to the process. Can you please
have a look ?
Thanks
Sumantro