Re: Article draft: Fleet Commander
by Oliver Gutierrez
Hi there.
I've modified the article with all the fantastic suggestions by Dale Raby.
Also I've removed the duplicated content and converted the document to ODF,
PDF and txt for people with slow computers or no google account.
Thanks for all and regards.
On Tue, Jun 26, 2018 at 10:45 AM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
wrote:
> Thank you very much Dale. I'm fixing the whole things you pointed. Almost
> all of them make sense from the IT part. :)
>
> I will finish the modifications maybe today or tomorrown and I will change
> the document to a text document so you can review it better :)
>
> Thanks for your help and your time!
>
> On Sat, Jun 23, 2018 at 4:53 AM Dale Raby <daleraby(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Just put in some suggestions. Your English is better than my Spanish but
>> I found a few minor grammatical errors.
>>
>> The biggest problem I found was that there seems to be a large block of
>> text that is a duplication. The section with the graphics is difficult for
>> me to view with my slow connection here.
>>
>> Google documents are always difficult for me to edit. Google assumes
>> that everyone has very fast connections and modern machines. I have
>> neither. It put me into "suggestion mode", which is actually very clever
>> of them... if only I had a fast connection!
>>
>> Bear in mind, that while I am a native speaker of English and have
>> actually done quite a bit of writing, I am NOT an IT expert. So.... take
>> any suggestions I give you with caution. I could be misunderstanding your
>> intent.
>>
>> I will look at this again tomorrow when I am not half asleep. Neighbor's
>> cattle (Herfords, two heifers, a calf and a 1,200 pound bull) got out onto
>> the road this evening. I and former US Congressman Alan Lasee helped a
>> police officer and the owner get them back into the enclosure. Was quite
>> enough excitement for me!
>>
>> Dale
>>
>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:14 PM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Thank you very much Mr Raby! Just give me the time to separate it in
>>> sections (so I will need to ad intros and outros for each block) and after
>>> that I will need a review.
>>>
>>> In the meantime, I will give you the access you required :)
>>>
>>> You just need to access the document in this URL
>>>
>>>
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1...
>>>
>>> Then Google will allow you to ask for document access and I will receive
>>> a notification to give you the permissions.
>>>
>>> If you do that and you see I had not answered or allowed, please tell me
>>> because maybe the notification is lost in my inbox.
>>>
>>> Again thanks.
>>>
>>>
>>> P.D. Swear words in spanish are usually enough to be very communicative
>>> of your current mood :P
>>>
>>> P.D. 2: After trying to send this email again, google asked me to give
>>> automatic access to view the document to recipients, so maybe you will be
>>> able to see it after receiving this.
>>>
>>>
>>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:35 PM Dale Raby <daleraby(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Senor Gutierrez:
>>>>
>>>> I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic
>>>> issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is
>>>> limited
>>>> to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
>>>>
>>>> I need permission to access your document though.
>>>>
>>>> Dale
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <
>>>> ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> > Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can
>>>> separate
>>>> > them into more "atomic" pieces :)
>>>> >
>>>> > Thanks for reviewing!
>>>> >
>>>> >
>>>> > On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>> >
>>>> > > On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <
>>>> ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
>>>> > > wrote:
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Hi there.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul
>>>> for
>>>> > > review.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_
>>>> > Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as
>>>> English
>>>> > is
>>>> > > > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
>>>> > welcome.
>>>> > >
>>>> > > Hi Oliver,
>>>> > >
>>>> > > There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too
>>>> > > long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it
>>>> > > might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you
>>>> > > consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like
>>>> > > this:
>>>> > >
>>>> > > * What is FC and how do you install it?
>>>> > > * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
>>>> > >
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Re: 5th Cockpit article ready for review
by Paul Frields
The article is edited -- looked good! -- and scheduled for Friday.
On Wed, Nov 6, 2019 at 6:40 PM Shaun Assam <thebeardedhermit(a)hotmail.com>
wrote:
> Sounds great. Thanks Paul.
>
> Regards,
>
> SA.
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> *From:* Paul Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Wednesday, November 6, 2019 2:46:52 PM
> *To:* Shaun Assam <thebeardedhermit(a)hotmail.com>
> *Cc:* magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org <magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org>
> *Subject:* Re: 5th Cockpit article ready for review
>
> Thanks Shaun, I took the editor task to look at this later today and
> hoping to publish on Friday. I'll let you know if I spot any issues or have
> questions.
>
> Paul
>
> On Tue, Nov 5, 2019 at 1:05 PM Shaun Assam <thebeardedhermit(a)hotmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Greetings everyone,
>
> The latest Cockpit article: Software and service management with Cockpit (
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29637&preview=true&preview_id=29637) is
> available for review. As always, if there's any issues, let me know and
> I'll correct them ASAP!
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Editorial board meeting recap 2019-11-06
by Adam Samalik
Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-11-06/magazine.2019...
Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-11-06/magazine.2019...
Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-11-06/magazine.2019...
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
=========================================
Meeting started by asamalik at 13:00:08 UTC. The full logs are available
at
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-11-06/magazine.2019...
.
Meeting summary
---------------
* Roll call (asamalik, 13:00:08)
* Agenda (asamalik, 13:02:49)
* Fedora Magazine has moved to a new Editorial Workflow (asamalik,
13:02:53)
* LINK: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/workflow/
(asamalik, 13:02:53)
* Following is the meeting agenda that is a slightly different than
before: (asamalik, 13:02:54)
* -- 1/ Last week's stats -- (asamalik, 13:02:54)
* -- 2/ In progress followup -- (asamalik, 13:02:54)
* -- 3/ Finished articles to review -- (asamalik, 13:02:54)
* -- 4/ Articles to edit -- (asamalik, 13:02:54)
* -- 5/ Publishing schedule -- (asamalik, 13:02:55)
* -- 6/ Article proposals to clarify / approve -- (asamalik,
13:02:55)
* -- 7/ Open floor -- (asamalik, 13:02:56)
* 1/ Last week's stats (asamalik, 13:03:39)
* Week of Oct 28: 161.5K pageviews -- roughly a double of the average,
seems like releasing new Fedora releases works for us well! :-)
(asamalik, 13:03:55)
* 2/ In progress followup (asamalik, 13:05:30)
* Looking at the 'in progress' column, is there something that's been
finished? Anything to follow up on with its author? (asamalik,
13:05:34)
* LINK: Board:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban
(asamalik, 13:05:34)
* -- #23 Advanced Ansible to manage Linux workstations with swiss-army
-- (asamalik, 13:08:21)
* LINK:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/23?ka...
(asamalik, 13:08:25)
* -- #95 Share Fedora -- (asamalik, 13:11:03)
* LINK:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/95?ka...
(asamalik, 13:11:08)
* -- #93 Setting up and configuring the sway window manager --
(asamalik, 13:11:52)
* LINK:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/93?ka...
(asamalik, 13:11:54)
* -- #82 [3-5] cool terminal pagers -- (asamalik, 13:12:17)
* LINK:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/82?ka...
(asamalik, 13:12:19)
* 3/ Finished articles to review (asamalik, 13:16:47)
* Looking at the 'review' column, let's decide which articles are good
to go. Move each either to the 'to edit' (finished) or to the 'in
progress' (needs more work) and provide feedback. (asamalik,
13:16:51)
* LINK: Board:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban
(asamalik, 13:16:51)
* -- #97 Edit Images on Fedora Easily With GIMP -- (asamalik,
13:17:16)
* LINK:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/97?ka...
(asamalik, 13:17:20)
* ACTION: stickster edit/image/schedule #100 (service mgmt on Cockpit)
(stickster, 13:26:25)
* ACTION: stickster edit/image/schedule #102 (make VMs with
libvirt+Cockpit) -- will probably hold this for at least a week
after #100 so we don't become Cockpit Magazine :-D (stickster,
13:27:09)
* 4/ Articles to edit (asamalik, 13:39:21)
* Looking at the 'to edit' column, assign an editor and a cover image
creator. (asamalik, 13:39:25)
* LINK: Board:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban
(asamalik, 13:39:25)
* 5/ Publishing schedule (asamalik, 13:40:37)
* Looking at the 'queued' and 'to edit' columns, decide the publishing
schedule for the next week period. (asamalik, 13:40:43)
* If there is not enough content, we might also need to look at the
'in progress' or even the 'article spec' columns come up with
additional content. (asamalik, 13:40:43)
* LINK: Board:
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban
(asamalik, 13:40:43)
* AGREED: PUBLISHING SCHEDULE: Friday 8 Nov, #100 Cockpit
(stickster:edit/stickster:image) -- Monday 11 Nov, #27 (all done) --
Wednesday 13 Nov, #97 GIMP (asamalik:edit/asamalik:image)
(asamalik, 13:52:31)
* 7/ Open floor (asamalik, 13:53:02)
* ACTION: asamalik to propose a publishing schedule for next week on
the list, so we have more time for open floor in the meeting
(asamalik, 13:53:39)
Meeting ended at 13:55:12 UTC.
Action Items
------------
* stickster edit/image/schedule #100 (service mgmt on Cockpit)
* stickster edit/image/schedule #102 (make VMs with libvirt+Cockpit) --
will probably hold this for at least a week after #100 so we don't
become Cockpit Magazine :-D
* asamalik to propose a publishing schedule for next week on the list,
so we have more time for open floor in the meeting
Action Items, by person
-----------------------
* asamalik
* asamalik to propose a publishing schedule for next week on the list,
so we have more time for open floor in the meeting
* stickster
* stickster edit/image/schedule #100 (service mgmt on Cockpit)
* stickster edit/image/schedule #102 (make VMs with libvirt+Cockpit)
-- will probably hold this for at least a week after #100 so we
don't become Cockpit Magazine :-D
* **UNASSIGNED**
* (none)
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* zodbot (27)
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Article on Fedora Magazine
by Paul Frields
Hi Karlis, can I ask you to do the following:
1. Login to our tracking board at
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/kanban --
use the Login link at top right
2. Use OpenID Connect on the login page and supply your Fedora account
name + password, which will log you in
3. Email us at magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org (or "reply all" or "reply
to list" here) to say you got logged in -- then we can add you to your
story card as a writer!
Love the submission and the editors want to get it edited and published
soon.
--
Paul
4 years