Brian
Is it possible for me to get a "text document or libreoffice word document?"
The author starts by saying using Jenkins.
What is Jenkins and where can I get it or information about it. Not stated in the draft.
Example of correction:
The choice of CentOS was to maximize support time and stay within the RHEL family.
The choice of using CentOS was to maximize support time and to stay within the RHEL family.
I would have written
The decision to use CentOS was to maximize support time and to stay within the RHEL family.
I did write you earlier about doing some editing and writing. I would be glad to work with authors to proof their writing.
I presume you can accept updates after go-live.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
From: Brian (bex) Exelbierd <bexelbie@redhat.com>
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Subject: Re: Contributing docs for maintaining and creating a Fedora remix