Good thorough job that Roger has done. He is to be congratulated.

May I make two (only two, he writes well) suggestions?

6. Multiboot on BIOS Systems

Alternative title   6 Multiboot on systems based on BIOS startup code

7. Multiboot on UEFI Systems

Alternative title   7 Multiboot on systems based on UEFI startup code
 
Regards

 Leslie
Mr. Leslie Satenstein
SENT FROM MY OPEN SOURCE LINUX SYSTEM.



From: Pete Travis <me@petetravis.com>
To: adamwill@fedoraproject.org
Cc: For participants of the Documentation Project <docs@lists.fedoraproject.org>
Sent: Saturday, October 4, 2014 3:30 PM
Subject: gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide

Hey Adam,

I've been working with Roger,  a new Fedora Docs contributor, on a
Fedora Multiboot Guide[1].

Although the work definitely needs to be structured, there is a solid
draft now, and your expertise would really be appreciated.  Would you
please skim it over for glaring misconceptions or omissions?

[1] https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/multiboot-guide/

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