I am not too familiar with the draft process of documents, but the Desktop User Guide (in draft) looks good and, for the most part, free of errors.  I've recently edited each page of the document, mainly for consistency and for grammar.  The link for this doc is below:

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/DesktopUserGuide

Eddie Elizondo

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