On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
<eric(a)christensenplace.us> wrote:
Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the
release
announcement[1] built. We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and
think we are in consensus that it is complete. Please look over it
and see if anything jumps out at you. If not, this is what we'd like
to go with.
[1]
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11
First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?
Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following.
Cheers!