I have been a Fedora biggot for about 15 years. I am a retired senior with an interest in the grammar as used within the docs. I rewrote some for my own pastime, I am not into using esoteric words in descriptions, but in spelling, punctuation, and in paragraph construction. For what it is worth, I am bilingual Candian-English, Canadian French with some Spanish.
As a pastime, I have edited the published docs for myself. Yes, my docs are more clear than the original, and more suited to the reader, whom I presume to be the beginner to Linux.
After the dust settles, I would like to find a way to have my document tweaking reviewed and integrated into the mother doc.