Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24035
Modified Files: RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml hardware-reqs-en.xml install-notes-en.xml multimedia-en.xml overview-en.xml package-movement-en.xml package-notes-en.xml splash-en.xml Log Message: Cleanup before tagging for trans.
Index: RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 --- RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.3 +++ RELEASE-NOTES-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:11 -0000 1.4 @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
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<article id="index" lang="en" arch="x86;x86_64;ppc" os="test;final">
Index: hardware-reqs-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/hardware-reqs-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.1 retrieving revision 1.2 diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 --- hardware-reqs-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000 1.1 +++ hardware-reqs-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.2 @@ -230,14 +230,11 @@ <listitem> <para> <!--<remark os="test">(ppc)</remark> --> &FC; &LOCALVER; - supports only the <quote>New World</quote> generation of - <trademark class="registered">Apple</trademark> Power - Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards. It also supports the - 64-bit G5 processor and, POWER processors in <trademark - class="registered">IBM</trademark> - <trademark>eServer</trademark> <trademark>pSeries</trademark>. - Currently 32-bit <trademark class="registered">IBM</trademark> - <trademark>RS/6000</trademark> machines are not supported. + supports only the <quote>New World</quote> generation of Apple + Power Macintosh, shipped circa 1999 onwards. It also supports + the 64-bit G5 processor and, POWER processors in IBM eServer + pSeries. Currently 32-bit IBM RS/6000 machines are not + supported. </para> </listitem> <listitem>
Index: install-notes-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/install-notes-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- install-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2 +++ install-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3 @@ -59,88 +59,90 @@ RAM.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> - </section> - <para> - The DVD or first CD of the installation set of &FC; is set to be - bootable on supported hardware. In addition, bootable CD images - can be found in the <filename>images/</filename> directory of the - DVD or first CD. These will behave differently according to the - hardware: - </para> - <variablelist> - <title>Boot Image Behavior by Hardware</title> + <para> + The DVD or first CD of the installation set of &FC; is set to be + bootable on supported hardware. In addition, bootable CD images + can be found in the <filename>images/</filename> directory of + the DVD or first CD. These will behave differently according to + the hardware: + </para> + <variablelist> + <title>Boot Image Behavior by Hardware</title> <varlistentry> <term>Apple Macintosh </term> - <listitem> - <para>The bootloader should automatically boot the appropriate - 32-bit or 64-bit installer. Power management support, - including sleep and backlight level management, is present - in the <filename>apmud</filename> package, which is in &FEX;. - &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default for yum. Following - installation, <filename>apmud</filename> can be installed by - running the command <command>yum install apmud</command> - in a terminal. - </para> - </listitem> - </varlistentry> - <varlistentry> - <term>64-bit IBM eServer pSeries (POWER4/POWER5)</term> - <listitem> - <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, the bootloader - (<command>yaboot</command>) should automatically boot the - 64-bit installer. - </para> - </listitem> - </varlistentry> - <varlistentry> - <term>32-bit CHRP (IBM RS/6000 and others)</term> - <listitem> - <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, select the - <filename>linux32</filename> boot image at the - <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt to start the 32-bit installer. - Otherwise, the 64-bit installer is started, which does not - work.</para> - </listitem> - </varlistentry> - <varlistentry> - <term>Genesi Pegasos II</term> - <listitem> - <para>As of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;, firmware with full support - for ISO9660 file systems is not yet released for the - Pegasos. However, the network boot image can be used. At - the OpenFirmware prompt, enter the command: </para> + <listitem> + <para>The bootloader should automatically boot the + appropriate 32-bit or 64-bit installer. Power management + support, including sleep and backlight level management, + is present in the <filename>apmud</filename> package, + which is in &FEX;. &FEX; for &FC; is configured by default + for yum. Following installation, + <filename>apmud</filename> can be installed by running the + command <command>yum install apmud</command> in a + terminal. + </para> + </listitem> + </varlistentry> + <varlistentry> + <term>64-bit IBM eServer pSeries (POWER4/POWER5)</term> + <listitem> + <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, the + bootloader (<command>yaboot</command>) should + automatically boot the 64-bit installer. + </para> + </listitem> + </varlistentry> + <varlistentry> + <term>32-bit CHRP (IBM RS/6000 and others)</term> + <listitem> + <para>After using OpenFirmware to boot the CD, select the + <filename>linux32</filename> boot image at the + <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt to start the 32-bit installer. + Otherwise, the 64-bit installer is started, which does not + work.</para> + </listitem> + </varlistentry> + <varlistentry> + <term>Genesi Pegasos II</term> + <listitem> + <para>As of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;, firmware with full support + for ISO9660 file systems is not yet released for the + Pegasos. However, the network boot image can be used. At + the OpenFirmware prompt, enter the command: + </para> <screen> <command>boot cd: /images/netboot/ppc32.img</command> </screen> - <para> - You will also need to configure OpenFirmware on the Pegasos - manually to make the installed &FC; system bootable. To do - this, you need to set the <envar>boot-device</envar> and - <envar>boot-file</envar> environment variables - appropriately. - </para> - </listitem> - </varlistentry> - <varlistentry> - <term>Network booting</term> - <listitem> - <para>There are combined images containing the installer - kernel and ramdisk in the images/netboot/ directory of the - install tree. These are intended for network booting with - TFTP, but can be used in many ways. - </para> - <para> - The command <command>yaboot</command> supports tftp - booting for IBM eServer pSeries and Apple Macintosh. - &FED; recommends using yaboot over the netboot images. - </para> + <para> + You will also need to configure OpenFirmware on the + Pegasos manually to make the installed &FC; system + bootable. To do this, you need to set the + <envar>boot-device</envar> and <envar>boot-file</envar> + environment variables appropriately. + </para> + </listitem> + </varlistentry> + <varlistentry> + <term>Network booting</term> + <listitem> + <para>There are combined images containing the installer + kernel and ramdisk in the images/netboot/ directory of the + install tree. These are intended for network booting with + TFTP, but can be used in many ways. + </para> + <para> + The command <command>yaboot</command> supports tftp + booting for IBM eServer pSeries and Apple Macintosh. &FED; + recommends using yaboot over the netboot images. + </para> </listitem> - </varlistentry> - </variablelist> + </varlistentry> + </variablelist> + </section> </section> <section> <title>Anaconda Notes</title> - + <itemizedlist> <listitem> <para>
Index: multimedia-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/multimedia-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- multimedia-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2 +++ multimedia-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ playback or recording, because the MP3 and MPEG (DVD) formats are patented, and the patent owners have not provided the necessary licenses. For more information, refer to <xref - linkend="sn-multimedia-exluded"/>. + linkend="sn-multimedia-excluded"/>. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
Index: overview-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/overview-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.1 retrieving revision 1.2 diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 --- overview-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 02:48:50 -0000 1.1 +++ overview-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.2 @@ -1,5 +1,13 @@ <section id="sn-overview"> <title>Overview of This Release</title> + <caution> + <title>Information Out-of-Date</title> + <para> + The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO; + &DISTROVER; + </para> + </caution> +<!-- <para> The following list includes brief summaries of some of the more significant aspects of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;: @@ -69,10 +77,6 @@ </para> </listitem> <listitem> -<!-- <remark os="test">%%% <ulink - url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136251">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136251</ulink> - %%%</remark>--> - <para> &SEL; — This release includes coverage for 80 new daemons by the targeted policy. There are changes to the @@ -543,42 +547,6 @@ </itemizedlist> </listitem> </itemizedlist> - <!-- - <note> - <remark os="test">%%% <ulink - url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136774">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=136774</ulink> - %%%</remark> - <title>Note</title> - <para> - VMware WS 4.5.2 is known to work on &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; after - the following workarounds are used:</para> - - <itemizedlist> - <listitem> - <para>You must upgrade the kernel modules and configuration - using the unofficial <filename>vmware-any-any-*</filename> - toolkit available from:</para> - - <remark os="test">%%% <ulink - url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=137378">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=137378</ulink> - %%%</remark> - - <para><ulink - url="http://platan.vc.cvut.cz/ftp/pub/vmware/">http://platan.vc.cvut.cz/ftp/pub/vmware/</ulink></para> - - </listitem> - - <listitem> - <para>After <filename>vmware-config.pl</filename> is run and the - VMware modules are loaded, the following command creates the - <filename>/sys/class/*</filename> nodes needed for - udev:</para> - - <para><command>cp -rp /dev/vm* - /etc/udev/devices/</command></para> - </listitem> - </itemizedlist> - </note> --> </section> <!--
Index: package-movement-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-movement-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- package-movement-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2 +++ package-movement-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3 @@ -1044,18 +1044,14 @@ <section> <title>Notes</title> <para> - system-config-mouse configuration utility has been dropped in this - release because synaptic and 3 button mouse configuration is being - done automatically and serial mice are not supported (<emphasis - role='strong'>copied to <ulink - url='/Docs/Beats/Desktop'>Docs/Beats/Desktop</ulink> - </emphasis> - OK?) + <application>system-config-mouse</application> configuration + utility has been dropped in this release because synaptic and 3 + button mouse configuration is being done automatically and serial + mice are not supported. </para> <para> Screensavers not installed by default anymore? Explain - why and provide commands to install them (<emphasis - role='strong'>copied to <ulink - url='/Docs/Beats/Desktop'>Docs/Beats/Desktop</ulink> + why and provide commands to install them. </emphasis>) </para> <!-- FIXME
Index: package-notes-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/package-notes-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- package-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2 +++ package-notes-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3 @@ -36,8 +36,14 @@ have undergone significant changes for &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;. For easier access, they are generally organized using the same groups used in Anaconda. - </para> - + </para + <caution> + <title>Information Out-of-Date</title> + <para> + The content in this section needs to be updated for &DISTRO; + &DISTROVER; + </para> + </caution> <section id="sn-basic-components"> <title>Basic Components</title> <para>
Index: splash-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/splash-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- splash-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 08:34:00 -0000 1.2 +++ splash-en.xml 25 Oct 2005 09:07:12 -0000 1.3 @@ -39,11 +39,13 @@ Refer to these webpages to find out more information about &FED;: </para> <itemizedlist> +<!-- FIXME Return when the section is updated <listitem> <para> <xref linkend="sn-new-in-fc"/> </para> </listitem> +--> <listitem> <para> <xref linkend="sn-intro"/> — Technical release notes
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