en-US/Virtualization.xml | 57 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------ 1 file changed, 28 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
New commits: commit 05d498be09446bdcf8bb125f364a89a1f6029401 Author: John J. McDonough jjmcd@fedoraproject.org Date: Thu Apr 30 16:20:07 2009 -0400
Correct numerous typos in Virtualization
diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml index e1c49c8..f237a3a 100644 --- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml +++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <para> For further details refer to the <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/VirtVNCAuth">Virtualization - VNC Authentication</ulink> wiki page + VNC Authentication</ulink> wiki page. </para> </section>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ <para> For further details refer to the <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/VirtImprovedConsole">Improved - Graphical Console for Virtual Guests</ulink> wiki page + Graphical Console for Virtual Guests</ulink> wiki page. </para> </section>
@@ -111,27 +111,26 @@ <para> Fedora 11 includes a merge of the <package>qemu</package> and <package>kvm</package> RPMs. The <package>kvm</package> package - is now obsoleted by <ulink type="http" - url="http://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/name/qemu-kvm%22%3Epngqemu-kvm.</ulink> - The merging of the two code bases continues upstream, but the - Fedora package maintainers have chosen to merge the packages now - in order reduce the maintenance burden and provide better - support. + is now obsoleted by <code>qemu-system-x86</code> subpackage of + <package>qemu</package>. The merging of the two code bases + continues upstream, but the Fedora package maintainers have + chosen to merge the packages now in order reduce the maintenance + burden and provide better support. </para>
<para> For further details refer to the <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/KVM_and_QEMU_merge">KVM - and QEMU merge</ulink> wiki page + and QEMU merge</ulink> wiki page. </para> </section>
<section> - <title>SVirt Mandatory Access Control</title> + <title>sVirt Mandatory Access Control</title>
<para> Fedora 11 integrates SELinux's Mandatory Access Control with - Virtualization. Virtual machines can now be much more effectively + virtualization. Virtual machines can now be much more effectively isolated from the host and one another, giving the increased assurance that security flaws cannot be exploited by malicious guests. @@ -139,7 +138,7 @@
<para> For further details refer to the <ulink type="http" - url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/SVirt_Mandatory_Access_Control%22%3E... + url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/SVirt_Mandatory_Access_Control%22%3E... Mandatory Access Control</ulink> wiki page. </para> </section> @@ -352,7 +351,7 @@ <itemizedlist> <listitem> <para> - new APIs for Node device detach reattach and reset + New APIs for node device detach reattach and reset </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -367,7 +366,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - allow QEmu domains to survive daemon restart + allow QEMU domains to survive daemon restart </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -382,7 +381,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - support of storage cache control options for QEmu/KVM + support of storage cache control options for QEMU/KVM </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -392,12 +391,12 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - Test driver infrastructure + test driver infrastructure </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> - parallelism in the daemon and associated config + parallelism in the daemon and associated configuration </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -417,7 +416,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - QEmu SDL graphics + QEMU SDL graphics </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -432,7 +431,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - QEmu pid file and XML states for daemon restart + QEMU pid file and XML states for daemon restart </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -482,7 +481,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - improve QEmu/KVM tun/tap performances + improve QEMU/KVM tun/tap performances </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -492,12 +491,12 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - support VNC password settings for QEmu/KVM + support VNC password settings for QEMU/KVM </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> - qemu driver version reporting + QEMU driver version reporting </para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> @@ -530,19 +529,19 @@ <listitem> <para> Option to remove storage when deleting a virtual - machine. + machine </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> File browser for libvirt storage pools and volumes, for - use when attaching storage to a new or existing guest. + use when attaching storage to a new or existing guest </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> Physical device assignment (PCI, USB) for existing - virtual machines. + virtual machines </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -613,7 +612,7 @@ New <command>virt-clone</command> option <option>--original-xml</option>, allows cloning a guest from an XML file, rather than require an - existing, defined guest. + existing, defined guest </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -621,14 +620,14 @@ New <command>virt-install</command> option <option>--import</option>, allows creating a guest from an existing disk image, bypassing any OS install - phase. + phase </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> New <command>virt-install</command> option <option>--host-device</option>, for connecting a - physical host device to the guest. + physical host device to the guest </para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -660,7 +659,7 @@ <para> Enhanced URL install support: Debian Xen paravirt, Ubuntu kernel and <filename>boot.iso</filename>, - Mandriva kernel, and Solaris Xen Paravirt + Mandriva kernel, and Solaris Xen paravirt </para> </listitem> <listitem>
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