Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4 In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv29566
Modified Files: README-en.xml Log Message: Quick lookover yields these, the rest are either correct or not ...
Index: README-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/README-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 --- README-en.xml 30 May 2005 19:47:11 -0000 1.3 +++ README-en.xml 30 May 2005 20:27:44 -0000 1.4 @@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ <articleinfo> <title>&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; README</title> <copyright> - <year>2004</year> + <year>2005</year> <holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder> </copyright> <legalnotice id="legalnotice"> - <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2004 &PROJ; and + <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2005 &PROJ; and others. Refer to the End User License Agreement and individual copyright notices in each source package for distribution terms.</para>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ </legalnotice> </articleinfo>
- <sect1 id="dir-org"> + <section id="dir-org"> <title>DIRECTORY ORGANIZATION</title>
<para>&DISTRO; is delivered on multiple CD-ROMs consisting of installation @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ CD-ROM):</para>
<screen arch="x86"> - <remark os="test">(x86)</remark> + <!-- <remark os="test">(x86)</remark> --> <computeroutput> /mnt/cdrom |----> Fedora @@ -91,24 +91,24 @@ `----> RPM-GPG-KEY -- GPG signature for packages from Red Hat </computeroutput> </screen> - +<!-- repetitive for the moment <screen arch="x86_64"> <remark os="test">(x86_64)</remark> <computeroutput> /mnt/cdrom - |----> Fedora - | |----> RPMS -- binary packages - | `----> base -- information on this release of Fedora + |- - - -> Fedora + | |- - - -> RPMS - - binary packages + | `- - - -> base - - information on this release of Fedora | Core used by the installation process - |----> images -- boot disk ISO image - |----> isolinux -- files necessary to boot from CD-ROM - |----> README -- this file - |----> RELEASE-NOTES -- the latest information about this release + |- - - -> images - - boot disk ISO image + |- - - -> isolinux - - files necessary to boot from CD-ROM + |- - - -> README - - this file + |- - - -> RELEASE-NOTES - - the latest information about this release | of Fedora Core - `----> RPM-GPG-KEY -- GPG signature for packages from Red Hat + `- - - -> RPM-GPG-KEY - - GPG signature for packages from Red Hat </computeroutput> - </screen> - + </screen> + --> <para>The remaining Installation CD-ROMs are similar to Installation CD-ROM 1, except that only the <filename>Fedora</filename> subdirectory is present.</para> @@ -152,9 +152,9 @@ <para><command>umount /mnt/cdrom</command></para> </listitem> </orderedlist> - </sect1> + </section>
- <sect1 id="installing"> + <section id="installing"> <title>INSTALLING</title>
<para>Many computers can now automatically boot from CD-ROMs. If you have @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ CD-ROM directly. After booting, the &DISTRO; installation program will start, and you will be able to install your system from the CD-ROM.</para>
- <para arch="x86;x86_64"><remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> The + <para arch="x86;x86_64"><!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> --> The <filename>images/</filename> directory contains the file <filename>boot.iso</filename>. This file is an ISO image that can be used to boot the &DISTRO; installation program. It is a handy way to start @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ must then burn <filename>boot.iso</filename> onto a recordable/rewriteable CD-ROM.</para>
- <para arch="x86;x86_64"><remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> Another image + <para arch="x86;x86_64"><!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> --> Another image file contained in the <filename>images/</filename> directory is <filename>diskboot.img</filename>. This file is designed for use with USB pen drives (or other bootable media with a capacity larger than a diskette @@ -181,14 +181,14 @@ <note arch="x86;x86_64">
<title>Note</title> - <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> + <!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> -->
<para>The ability to use this image file with a USB pen drive depends on the ability of your system's BIOS to boot from a USB device.</para> </note> - </sect1> + </section>
- <sect1 id="get-help"> + <section id="get-help"> <title>GETTING HELP</title>
<para>For those that have web access, see <ulink @@ -197,9 +197,9 @@
<para><ulink url="https://listman.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/">https://listman.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink></para> - </sect1> + </section>
- <sect1 id="export-ctl"> + <section id="export-ctl"> <title>EXPORT CONTROL</title>
<para>The communication or transfer of any information received with this @@ -209,9 +209,9 @@ country listed in such applicable laws, regulations and rules unless properly authorized. The obligations under this paragraph shall survive in perpetuity.</para> - </sect1> - - <sect1 id="s1-test" os="test"> + </section> +<!-- + <section id="s1-test" os="test"> <title>README Feedback Procedure</title>
<para>(This section will disappear when the final &DISTRO; release is @@ -277,12 +277,15 @@ %%%</remark>
<para>These links point to Bugzilla entries for the information preceding - the link. This makes it easier for people to contribute — just + the link. This makes it easier for people to contribute — just point your browser at the link, add your comments to the bug, and commit your changes.</para> - </sect1> + </section> +--> +<!-- <ackno>( <emphasis arch="x86">x86</emphasis> <emphasis arch="x86_64">x86_64</emphasis> )</ackno> +--> </article>
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