Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17793
Modified Files: new-users.xml Log Message: Make this admonition clearer.
Index: new-users.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- new-users.xml 29 Apr 2007 18:37:27 -0000 1.2 +++ new-users.xml 29 Apr 2007 18:50:11 -0000 1.3 @@ -200,11 +200,11 @@ system as desired.</para> <tip> <title>Download Size</title> - <para>A default installation of &DISTRO; requires more time to - download than the Live CD, but includes more software. It - generally requires less time to download than the entire DVD - distribution. Actual results depend on the mirror you select - and general network traffic conditions.</para> + <para>Installing the default software for &DISTRO; over the + Internet requires more time than the Live CD, but less time + than the entire DVD distribution. Actual results depend on + the actual software you select and network traffic + conditions.</para> </tip> <para>The following table explains where to find the desired files on a mirror site.</para>
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