Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24351
Modified Files:
welcome.xml
Log Message:
- Improve sectioning and admonition
- Make admonition clearer
Index: welcome.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/welcome.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- welcome.xml 11 May 2007 18:51:34 -0000 1.3
+++ welcome.xml 24 May 2007 02:19:58 -0000 1.4
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
After the installation program loads its next stage, a welcome
dialog appears. Select <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to continue.
</para>
- <section id="ch-initialize-hdd">
+ <section id="sn-initialize-hdd">
<title>Initializing the Hard Disk</title>
<para>If no readable partition tables are found on existing hard
disks, the installation program asks to initialize the hard disk.
@@ -26,16 +26,19 @@
unreadable. If your system has a brand new hard disk with no
operating system installed, or you have removed all partitions on
the hard disk, answer <guilabel>Yes</guilabel>.</para>
+ </section>
+ <section id="sn-raid-config">
+ <title>RAID or Other Nonstandard Configurations</title>
+ <para>Certain RAID systems or other nonstandard configurations may
+ be unreadable to the installation program and the aforementioned
+ prompt may appear. The installation program responds to the
+ physical disk structures it is able to detect.</para>
<warning>
- <title>RAID or Other Nonstandard Configurations</title>
- <para>Certain RAID systems or other nonstandard configurations may
- be unreadable to the installation program and the aforementioned
- prompt may appear. The installation program responds to the
- physical disk structures it is able to detect.</para>
- <para><emphasis>If you have a nonstandard disk configuration that
- can be detached during installation and configured afterward,
- power off the system, detach it, and restart the
- installation.</emphasis></para>
+ <title>Detach Unneeded Disks</title>
+ <para>If you have a nonstandard disk configuration that can be
+ detached during installation and detected and configured
+ afterward, power off the system, detach it, and restart the
+ installation.</para>
</warning>
</section>
</chapter>