Thanks for the feedback.
On Tue, 2015-06-16 at 13:15 -0500, Michael Catanzaro wrote:
It looks great as a flyer to give to people who already use Fedora
want to see what's new in F22 that wasn't there in F21. The "Other
improvements" section is getting a bit technical, but that might be
fine depending on the target audience.
I've basically picked up stuff from the release notes - this is all
just a draft - a proof of concept pretty much. :)
I don't think this would be an effective flyer to hand to people who
don't already use Fedora, since it focuses on changes in F22 and
assumes prior knowledge of the operating system (what is "GNOME
Shell?"). Presumably that's not the target audience of this flyer?
We're discussing this on the ambassadors list. It's quite difficult to
have a single flyer that can target newbies + current users + advanced
users - they are looking for different information and need to be
I'm working on a plan here:
It'll be great if the WGs could discuss how they want to market their
product a little and provide the marketing team with their
A nit: don't put quotes around overlay scrollbars (or other things
aren't quotes). That makes it seem like they're not overlay
at all, but some sort of euphemism. For example: http://distractify.c
history/ -- you "matter" to us means you do not matter to us,
"beer" means the beer is so terrible it's almost not really beer,
underwear means it's been used, etc.
Ah, on it!
Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD"