On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 12:42:27PM -0600, Michael Catanzaro wrote:
Oooh, good job, marketing folks.
Courtesy several contributors, including Robert Mayr, Ricky Elrod, Mo
Duffy, and Ryan Lerch.
I had another email that I think pulls in lots of your finds/fixes
here, but wanted to address additionally the following:
On Wed, 2014-11-12 at 11:55 -0500, Paul W. Frields wrote:
* Nitpick: stylistically, I don't like the ampersand in "hobbyists &
students," that's not really typical or expected. Simply writing out
"and" would look better. [1] has some guidance on when to use these.
Agreed, we'll fix that.
* "Fedora Workstation is a reliable, user-friendly, and
powerful
operating system for laptops and PC hardware." This is a little
confusing. Is a laptop not "PC hardware?" Does this mean I can run
Fedora on any laptop, but only desktops that came pre-installed with
Windows? ("I'm a Mac, and I'm a PC" teaches us that the world is
divided
between PCs and Macs, after all.) So it might be better to say
"...operating system for laptop and desktop computers" or something
along those lines instead.
OK, I buy this, but what about even more friendly: "Fedora Workstation
is a reliable, user-friendly, and powerful operating system for your
laptop or dekstop computer."
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