Hi everyone,
Ok, wanted to send out a quick update which includes all the
sentence/spelling fixes people sent. I also tried clarifying the
integrated desktop experience item as Lukáš Tinkl suggested.
Only thing I haven't done here is reworked the goals listing as per
Ryan's suggestion as it would be a bigger job and I am not convinced the
end result would produce a 'better' text. That said I am open to
suggestions if someone wants to propose and alternate text/layout to
this section.
Christian
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