remove the black tiles as they are not matching with all other tones of blue.
From: Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
Sent: Thursday, September 17, 2009 8:14:08 PM
Subject: Re: [Design-team] F12 Wallpaper 9-16-09 0000 UTC
On Thu, Sep 17, 2009 at 10:54:20AM +0200, Martin Sourada wrote:
On Wed, 2009-09-16 at 22:02 -0500, Michael Beckwith wrote:
> The links and files are the same, but they have been updated with my latest work.
> all versions available in the folder including the latest svg up until now.
Honestly, I don't like your approach. I think what this design needs is
slightly better shaping of the tiles, colour change towards the
perspective mosaico design we are using now and figuring out its
transition to some background. Just placing the already prepared SVG
against almost random background does not seem to work very well...
Anyway, that's just my opinion, others might disagree, so don't feel
discouraged by it ;-)
* Blur the tiles increasingly as they increase in distance, to
increase the dimensional sense
* Reduce the green coloration in the outermost sets of tiles
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