remove the black tiles as they are not matching with all other tones of blue.
 
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From: Paul W. Frields <stickster@gmail.com>
To: design-team@lists.fedoraproject.org
Sent: Thursday, September 17, 2009 8:14:08 PM
Subject: Re: [Design-team] F12 Wallpaper 9-16-09 0000 UTC

On Thu, Sep 17, 2009 at 10:54:20AM +0200, Martin Sourada wrote:
> On Wed, 2009-09-16 at 22:02 -0500, Michael Beckwith wrote:
> > The links and files are the same, but they have been updated with my latest work.
> >
> > ----------------------
> >
> > http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/mosaic/F12-mosaic-background.png
> >
> > all versions available in the folder including the latest svg up until now.
> >
> > --
> > ~Michael
> > http://michaelbox.net
> Honestly, I don't like your approach. I think what this design needs is
> slightly better shaping of the tiles, colour change towards the
> perspective mosaico design we are using now and figuring out its
> transition to some background. Just placing the already prepared SVG
> against almost random background does not seem to work very well...
>
> Anyway, that's just my opinion, others might disagree, so don't feel
> discouraged by it ;-)

Some suggestions:

* Blur the tiles increasingly as they increase in distance, to
  increase the dimensional sense

* Reduce the green coloration in the outermost sets of tiles

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