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On 11/16/2009 04:39 AM, Ruediger Landmann wrote:
> On 11/16/2009 06:18 PM, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
>> Here is illustration  the document:
>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-redundancy.png
>>
>> You noticed there are at least four Fedora names on that page alone
>> which is an overkill
>> for header.
>
> Sorry Luya -- I get a 404 for that URL
>
>> I made illustration for suggestion below:
>>
>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-suggestion.png
>>   
>
> And 404 for this one too.
>
>> I understand about the ears. As highlighted, there are a lot of repeated
>> words. I made an alternate version that preserve "Fedora" wordmark
>> (original color and black version included) for image replacing "Made
>> with Publican"
>>
>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.png
>>   
>
> This isn't bad; but I find the change in colour between the word
> "Fedora" and the word "Documentation" quite jarring.
>
>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs-alt.png
>>   
>
> 404 for this one
>
>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.svg  

Links fixed.


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Luya Tshimbalanga
Graphic & Web Designer
E: luya@fedoraproject.org
W: http://www.thefinalzone.net
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