#298: New Fedora flyer, or banner svg's for general usage - review request
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Reporter: zoltanh721 | Owner: saunders
Type: materials for ambassadors request | Status: new
Priority: major | Component: Other Artwork
Severity: Quick & Easy | Resolution:
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Comment (by saunders):
Bigger image:
1. Now I can see the Readiness subtitle. "Tools for engineering in every
release into your hand" is somewhat broken English, and doesn't quite
capture the First Foundation. Perhaps the intent was something like this
"Engineer the leading edge of open source"? Although I can't tell...
2. Suggested Freedom bold paragraph text edits: "We're serious about user
freedom - and we don't say that lightly - we take it seriously. We stand
up for our beliefs. Free software and free software ethics is an essential
part of Fedora and the Fedora community."
3. Suggested Friends bold paragraph text edits: "We're a diverse,
welcoming community. Our strength comes from our diversity. From new
beginners to veteran hackers, we're a committed and welcoming team."
4. There are many different ways you can go with the Greatness paragraph,
but I'd suggest an emphasis on the upstream feature development
characteristic of the Fedora project. So something like this might work:
"Excellence in Fedora means excellence in the broader free software world.
We don't keep our innovations to ourselves, we work upstream with projects
directly so all users can benefit from our improvements, in an open and
transparent process."
5. Suggested First bold paragraph text edits: "Our focus on upstream
innovation keeps Fedora users on the leading edge of the open source
world. Come create the future with us".
6. I feel like there are some kerning issues in the Boldness, Coolness,
Greatness, and Readiness titles. In particular the spacing between the
following look uneven to me:
- "Bo" and "ess" in Boldness
- "Coo" and "ess" in Coolness
- "rea" and "ess" in Greatness, and
- "ead" and "ess" in Readiness
Overall the HU design team has a great flyer/banner concept that looks
fantastic. I do think that implementing my tiny suggestions could help
polish it. Well done!
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