On 04/18/2017 04:09 PM, Jeff Sandys wrote:
M. Duffy,
I think the structure of the statement is wrong and could be improved
by changing it like this:
**Fedora creates an innovative open platform for users, community
members and software developers to build solutions that lights up
hardware, containers and clouds.**
One test of a good statement (like a good image) is you can redact
parts of it and it still makes sense. People build solutions that
light up clouds, I'm sure that is an image you can work with.
The "lights up" piece still seems a bit off to me, fairly cheesy. We
could illustrate "lighting up" without literally needing that term in
the statement.
~m