Any suggestions, fixes, etc. for this post?

https://public.etherpad-mozilla.org/p/fad-summary-2016-june

Please shoot them my way by EOD tomorrow. If you have any _major_ changes, please put them in [[double brackets]] so I can see what's changed.

Also, several folks helped with this write-up, who else should be on the byline?

Best, 

jzb