Team--I read the .pdf that was posted on the Talking Points page on
the wiki and thought it could use a few edits--I have posted a revised
version in Open Office document format at the following location:
http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/TalkingPoints
Please read and give me detailed feedback--my edits included spelling,
syntax, and some content enhancements.
Just make the changes in the wiki. If nots agreeable we can always
revert it.
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Rahul
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